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Poetic Devices

Below is a table of various poetic devices and their meanings. Over the past year I’ve done articles on individual ones, but here are I am putting them all together in one post. These are just some of them.

Poetic DevicesMeaningExample
AssonanceRhyming of the same
vowel sounds
Leaves blew in the breeze
AlliterationThe occurrence of the same letter or
sound at the beginning of adjacent
or closely connected words.
Sweet singing doves
MetaphorThis is where an object in, or the subject of,
a poem is described as being the same
as another otherwise unrelated object.
The sand is a warm blanket
SimileA figure of speech involving the comparison of one thing with another thing of a different kind. It’s used to make a description more vivid.As fast as a cheetah.
PersonificationGiving an inanimate object human characteristics.The moon smiled back.
ImageryUsed in poetry, novels, or other writing that uses
vivid description that appeals to the readers’ senses. This creates an image or idea in their head.
The leaves sounded like clapping hands.
AllusionAn expression intended to
call something to mind
without mentioning it specifically. It’s a hint
towards something.
Chocolate is his kryptonite.
Superman is alluded to but not mentioned.
HyperboleExaggerated statements or not meant
to be taken literally
I am so hungry I could eat a whole side of beef.
AllegoryA story, poem, or picture that can be interpreted
to reveal a hidden meaning,
like a moral or political moral.
Animal Farm by George Orwell is an example of an allegory.
ConsonanceThe repetition of consonant sounds within
a line of text.
The boss had a loss.
Molly remained jolly.
RepetitionThe act of repeating something that has already been said. Used to create effect.Time after time.
Over and over.
EnjambmentThe continuation of a sentence or phrase from one line of poetry to the next.Birds fly
above a

dew covered
grassy meadow.
MeterIn poetry, meter is the basic rhythmic structure of a verseiambic pentameter
trochaic foot
anapestic foot
(More on these in another post)
Posted in Prompts

The Last Goodbye

Describe the last difficult “goodbye” you said.

A guy friend of mine and I used to work together. Something cane up and he had to quit. It devastated me. We enjoyed working together. It was fun.

Posted in Social

Kitty Thoughts

“Hey! We’re trying to sleep here.”
“You missed a spot.”
“Don’t look at me. I didn’t do it.”
“Just try and take it. “
Posted in Writing

Feed Your Creativity

What do we need for nourishment? Food. When we eat food, we feel better. Our body feels sustained. It might also depend on what you eat, but that is neither here nor there. Actually, I’m eating as I write this article (Hahaha, no really). But how do we feed our creativity when we’re trying to think of material for writing a story? I’m not talking about writer’s block. I’m talking about putting some oomph into your story, something that stands out to readers. The answer to this question will vary from individual to individual because we are all different. Below are some ideas on things you can do to wake up your creative mind.

  • Read books.
  • Listen to music (I hear classical music is good for this).
  • Do a craft of some sort.
  • Put a jigsaw puzzle together. You’d be surprised how much this works.
  • Create ideas with some one else. Hey, two heads are better than one.
  • Take a drive somewhere that appeals to your senses.
  • Look at beautiful photos and imagine yourself inside the picture. Use your senses and describe it.
  • Take a stroll through a cemetery.
  • Cook/bake something.
  • Go to the beach.
Posted in Social

Right and Wrong

Doing what is right is never wrong, and doing what is wrong is never right.

Posted in Prompts

Not even for a day

If you could be someone else for a day, who would you be, and why?

There is no one else I’d rather be. I like who I am. I’m happy. Even with everything I’ve been through in my life, I like where I am at in life. I got here through trial, error, and learning. Praise God for leading me through it all.

Posted in Social

Loving and Losing

If someone has never loved, how will they ever know the heartache of losing love?

City Living: Chicago, Illinois, USA

Posted in Dialogue

Tag Lines

In a story in order to determine who is speaking a piece of dialogue, tag lines are used. Notice in the following example the last two lines don’t have a tag line. That’s because one is not always needed once it’s been established who is talking. Generally, a person will do the speaking every other line. So, in this example, it is assumed that Tia is then doing the speaking in line 3 and Sarah is doing the speaking in line 4. If a tag line is added every time someone speaks, the flow of the dialogue sounds odd. BUT, every now and then, throw in a tag line so that readers can keep track of who is speaking. There’s nothing more irritating than having to go back through a long piece of dialogue in order to keep track of who is doing the speaking.

Example: “I don’t like it one bit. It won’t work,” said Tia.
“Sure it will,” replied Sarah. “Trust me.”
“That’s the problem. None of your ideas ever work.”
“They do too.”

Please keep in mind that you don’t always have to use the word ‘said’ when creating a tag line. Here are some options in the list below. There are many many more than what is here. This is just a taste.

  • replied Tia
  • responded Tia
  • stated Tia
  • whispered Tia
  • answered Tia
  • demanded Jack
  • claimed Susan
  • asked Bill
  • agreed Susan
  • added Susan
  • admitted Jack
  • fumed Bill
  • feared Sally
  • giggled Jane
  • indicated Jack
  • joked Tia
  • decided Tia
Posted in Fiction

To Work or Not to Work by L. M. Montes

The starving mind settles in spring,
with dew drops of knowledge enveloping–
newness takes root, holding tight to growth
as heights strived for lift higher,
reaching then gaining more.
But sitting in a dark room
with emptiness depleting, draining–
sets fire to sprouting mindful leaves
and sucks the soul from deep within,
flushing oneself as winter sets in.