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Rhyme Scheme

When a work of poetry contains rhyme, there is a pattern to this rhyme as the poem moves from the beginning to the end. This pattern is called rhyme scheme. Let’s look at the poem below entitled Pride from a blog post written on June 9, 2022. The rhyme scheme for this poem is aab b ccd d. Notice that lines 4 and 9 don’t rhyme with any other line, so we leave that blank.

Line 1: Against the wind one pushes forth, a
Line 2: with fight and footsteps heading north, a
Line 3: an arctic breeze inside it grabs b
Line 4: a hold of bones
Line 5: the heart it stabs. b

Line 6: How to stop this hardship now, c
Line 7: just ask for help, to you it bows, c
Line 8: no and no for help is forbidden, d
Line 9: to do for oneself
Line 10: so they’ll be forgiven. d

The letter a in lines 1 and 2 represent the first rhyme sound. The letter b in lines 3 and 5 represent the second rhyme sound. The letter c in lines 6 and 7 represent the third rhyme sound, and the letter d represents the fourth rhyme sound.

Is it possible to have lines further on down in the poem rhyme with lines further up in the poem? Yes. Let’s look at the poem below. Notice that lines 5 and 6 rhyme with the first rhyme in lines 1 and 2, therefore their rhyme is labeled with an a. The rhyme scheme for this poem is:
aabb aacc

Line 1: A wave rolled smoothly to the shore, a
Line 2: unlocking beauty’s lushes door, a
Line 3: so fluent did it merely creep, b
Line 4: and o’er the sand to make me sleep. b

Line 5: Dream I did of clouds and lore, a
Line 6: that left me struck and wanting more, a
Line 7: but breezes came and touched my face, c
Line 8: with nature’s fingers of love and lace. c

Do these rhyme schemes or patterns have to be coupled together as above? No. Let’s take a look at the poem below, Sonnet I: Winter from my blog post on June 3, 2021. Notice that now each end word of every line rhymes with the line two lines down from it. So, this is how the rhyme scheme looks: abab cdcd efef gg

When snow has come and lingered for a time, a
The mountains shine like pure white satin sheets. b
The jagged rocks that stand and point like knives, a
Have but a look of poise and symmetry. b
The houses they in hibernation go, c
and sink like ships way deep beneath the waves. d
Cold air does whoosh in frigid gusty blows, c
But stops to peek a while inside a cave. d
The birds take off from empty bare tree nests, e
To seek their food which they know is not there. f
The trees did fall asleep like all the rest e
Of this great wintry beauty of no where. f
The hunters coming back from years afar, g
Do find their world still bright like heaven’s star. g

There are more rhyme schemes than what I have displayed here. This is just a basic view of what a rhyme scheme is. Below is an excellent link that delves further into the different rhyme schemes used in poetry.

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The Golden Plight by L. M. Montes

In my room so bold and bright,
on the wall with gold and light,
was a tree with leaves to pluck,
and waved this day to spin my luck,
but I said no, I’ll take a stance,
and find my way through time’s expanse.

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Types of Rhyme

If you write poetry, you are no stranger to rhyme. But rhyme goes further than just making the end words in lines of a poem rhyme. It can add to the flow of a poem as well. Below are the different types of rhyme and some examples of each.

  1. End rhyme: the rhyming of the end words of lines of a poem.
    Example: Thoughts like muddied water pooled,
    and sloshed around my head and dueled,
  2. Internal rhyme: the rhyming of two words within the same line of poetry. Or it can be the rhyming of words within lines across lines of a poem.
    Example: The light of day so pure and bright,
    as I lay upon the hay,
    Example: The light of day uplifts and blooms,
    so bright and easy within my heart,
  3. Slant rhyme: this is sometimes called imperfect or partial rhyme because it uses similar but not identical sounds.
    Example: On rose petals there I sat
    afloat in nature’s scented grasp,
  4. Eye rhyme:  an imperfect rhyme in which two words are spelled similarly but pronounced differently.
    Example: home, come
    bough, though
    love, move
    comb, bomb
  5. Identical rhyme: using the exact same word in the rhyming position.
    Example: Against the wall he moved to lean,
    and watch the cattle so thin and lean,
  6. Masculine rhyme: when the rhyme is on the final syllable of the two rhyming words. Usually they are monosyllabic words or a rhyme only occurring in the final syllable
    Example: look, took
    cat, sat
    rare, despair
  7. Feminine rhyme: when not one but two syllables rhyme. The first syllable is stressed and the second syllable is unstressed.
    Example: measles, weasels— Notice that the first syllables in each of these words rhyme and is stressed, whereas the second syllable in each word rhymes but is unstressed.

The above types of rhyme are seven of the most popular. I’m sure you’ve used some of them already without necessarily knowing the names of them. Have fun with them.

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Love so Rare by L. M. Montes

On rose petals there I sat,
afloat in nature’s scented grasp,
The sweet sensation so assailing,
a newness of life for me unveiling,
tacitness at times is golden,
essential nature on me beholden,
inspiration stabs life’s tides,
and serves to me eyes opened wide.

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Give Your Mind a Break

What happens when you write everyday? Two things. You get further in your writing project than if you hadn’t. Two, you end up needing to give your mind a break. Yes, step aside from the written word for a day or two. Do something else entirely. Work out in your garden, do a craft, go to a movie, play a game, do some house work, or all of the above.

What happens is this, your mind can get stuck, and you lose your steam. Your brain gets tired like the rest of our body when we do too much of something. When you work out in the yard for a couple hours, aren’t you tired when you stop? Your body feels sapped. You have no energy left. You need to rejuvenate. You might even go and feed your body a Gatorade and/or a snack.

Today I felt mentally drained because I had been writing everyday, working on my manuscript that’s almost finished. I can see the finish line from here. I want to get it done. So I’m sitting at my desk with my laptop in front of me, and my brain is saying, ‘uhhh, no.’ I didn’t want to do anything. I had no ‘juice’ left. Getting up and doing something else didn’t appeal to me either. So what did I do? I got up and did something anyway, kicking and screaming. Well, that’s a little extreme. After I got going with my other activity, sweeping the patio and gardening, it rejuvenated me.

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Sailing Breezes by L. M. Montes

Waves bob up down
toss turn as wind blows,
set sail swirl spin
a breeze blast of salt air.

Waving bobbing all around,
tossing turning dropping down,
sailing swirling spinning blowing,
from breezes blasting salt air about.

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Elusive Scent by L. M. Montes

A scent so sweet swept o’er to me,
across the tides of breezes be,
I tried to grab and snatch it close,
but through my fingers it left and rose
up to the sky and blow away,
to come again another day.

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Words Bitter Sweet Sound by L. M. Montes

Spattering words, a nothingness pushed forth,
rang in my ears and flew out the door,
all that’s left is the droning of sound,
from mouths speaking nothing
but words spewed aground.

You want me to listen,
so get your facts straight,
instead of pure nothing
filled with all hate.

God’s gentle nudging grew words from your lips,
and sang to my heart, then to my finger tips,
now life is filled with meaning profound,
from mouths sprinkling something
so rich with sweet sound.

You want me to listen,
you got your facts straight,
instead of pure nothing,
you weren’t filled with hate.

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The Shadow by L. M. Montes

In far reaches of the mind,
lies the fear that makes one blind,
stiffen from a shadow seen,
and grips the breath so staunch and mean,
blood invades, a stench so rank,
from deep inside, so hearts they sank,
but then a blip of light shown through,
revealing eyes so dead from you,
the shadow’s shroud now covered,
the whole of all who hovered,
they will never be the same,
as from your body a spirit came.