Blog Feed

Posted in Editing

Planning Your Story

There needs to be some degree of planning, when it comes to writing your story/book. I’ll let you in on what I do. Maybe that will help you. It took me some time to figure out my own personal writing process as it relates to writing a book. I had heard and read about the planner and the pantser (see details of each below).

Planner: One who plans out ahead of time each chapter and scene, then sets out writing and sticks to what they planned.
Pantser: One who makes it all up as they go along with no planning prior to.

I’ve tried to be a planner. And failed. Why? Because as I’m typing along I always end up veering away from what I planned. Try as I might to get back on track with my plans, I couldn’t. More precisely, I wouldn’t, because what I ended up with was way better than what I planned in the first place. So, I realized I’m a pantser. Well, for the most part anyway.

Don’t get me wrong, there are times when the situation calls for planning. In that case I use a journal to write down ideas to use for later. In my second novel I had to come up with seven poetic brain twisters for the main character to figure out. Those I planned, and each of them went into my journal. Also, when it came to some scenes, I’d sit down to write them, and I’d end up deleting and starting over. The scene was in pieces in my head and getting them ironed out was nagging me, so I set to writing in my journal the various pieces. Looking at them on paper helped. Once it all came clear, I set to typing my scene once more.

So, you see. There is always some type of planning one has to do. Figure out how you write/work/your process. Everyone is different. If you don’t know right now, take what others are doing, try it, and go with what works for you.

Posted in Prompts

To Open a Shop

Daily writing prompt
If you were going to open up a shop, what would you sell?

Beads and books.

Posted in Social

Roses from My Garden

Posted in Prompts

Carrying at All times

What is the most important thing to carry with you all the time?

My dignity/self-respect and manners.

Posted in Prompts

Impact on the World

What change, big or small, would you like your blog to make in the world?

A positive one.

Posted in Social

Trees Equal Peace

Posted in Characterization

Traces

When you’ve depicted a character so well within a story that traces of them are left behind in the reader’s heart, mind, and soul.

Posted in Prompts

Alternate Universe

Describe your life in an alternate universe.

Much the same minus mistakes made, and I would be more mature and less naive in my 20’s, 30’s, and 40’s. Of course, new mistakes would be made because no world is perfect.

Posted in Scenes

Creating Flashbacks

In a previous post I gave a brief account of when to use a flashback. In this post I’ll be covering how to create them. It really isn’t hard. If done right, the reader will know and understand that a flashback is occurring.

But first, how does one separate a flashback from the rest of the text/story/scene. Simple…with an extra space gap between the paragraph just before the flashback starts and the flashback itself. Second, I always find it better if the flashback itself is in italics. There’s no rule that says you have to do this. I just find it better to do for the benefit of the readers.

So how do you lead into a flashback? Here are some samples of some lead-ins.

  1. Sally thought about the first red rose she got from her boyfriend and smiled…..
  2. Jeff leaned against the door frame and watched his family open Christmas presents. Nothing had changed since he was kid…..
  3. Much like right now, my mother never did understand what happened that summer…..
  4. I slipped my foot into the saddle’s stirrup, grabbed the horn, then froze. Would this time go smoothly, or would I end up like last time…..
  5. Stan straightened his tie. He expected his wife, Dawn, to saunter in and take over then give it a once over, but not this time nor any other time. He smiled at the last time she’d done that…..

Remember, use flashbacks only when necessary, and don’t make writing them more difficult than they have to be. If you’re in doubt, have someone else look at it.

Posted in Scenes

Flashbacks

Have you ever read a story that had a flashback, and it left you wondering why the flashback was used? Simply put, if your flashback doesn’t drive your plot forward in any way; or if it doesn’t build your characters, don’t use it. Flashbacks should be used sparingly. They must serve a purpose or you risk the reader getting bored. What happens when readers get bored? They put the story/book down.

Photo by Johannes Plenio on Pexels.com